Line 20 of yesterday's poem by Gemini —
"The Cullinane, a geometer's dream" —
has a rather awkward rhythm.
Perhaps it should be ". . . a poet's dream"
or ". . . a diamond dream."
Line 20 of yesterday's poem by Gemini —
"The Cullinane, a geometer's dream" —
has a rather awkward rhythm.
Perhaps it should be ". . . a poet's dream"
or ". . . a diamond dream."
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